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I think your idea has a lot of potential. I particularly like the juxtaposition of the church setting and the priest with the themes of murder. This demonstrates a clear understanding of the generic conventions of a thriller.
My only concern is your intention to depict someone slitting their wrists, you could consider prosthetics as other class members suggested but I think the most sensible and safest way around this is to film it in such a way that suggests the person has just slit their wrists rather than trying to film it.
Your blog would benefit from a location report of the church you intend to film at, detail why you chose it, some images of where you intend to film, any potential problems that the location presents etc.